Lina Al Sharabi
Prof.
Dania Adra
English
203
26
September 2015
“Brand Malala”: Western Exploitation of a
School Girl
The
story of Malala Yousafzai is one that has brought concern to many around the
world, especially in Pakistan and Britain. Carol Anne Grayson argues that
despite the fact that Malala has fought for her right in education against the
Pakistani terrorist group known as Taliban, after being shot, Malala has been
exposed to the British media at such a young age and has been recognized by
many, which is considered unfair to those who have suffered all over the world
and are still suffering but got neither attention nor care as Malala has.
The
feelings of the writer about the whole issue were openly exemplified throughout
the text. At the beginning, her mood was neutral, however during the validation
of the topic, Grayson was excited yet very angry, not regarding what happened
to Malala, nor what she has done, but at the injustice that’s taking place, as
the text was filled with criticism against the British media. However, at the
end of the text, calmness filled the text, and the writer concluded in a way
that shows the readers that she is not condemning Malala, but condemning the
reactions that have been acknowledged because of her case.
At
some point during the text, Grayson was using sarcasm to reflect her angry
mood, which was interpreted through her use of quotations, such as “mentors” in
the first paragraph. (Grayson 593)
Her point of view was justified by including such examples throughout the text
that criticize her own country. This simply implied the type of style she used
in her text. Grayson had the ability to clarify her perspective through her
style of writing, which was very clear. Her text was explanatory and lacked
ambiguity. She also managed to keep the readers focused and attentive.
The
purpose of this text is to help the readers understand the unfairness that many
go through, but at the same time acknowledge Malala’s situation, therefore,
this text is considered argumentative. Furthermore, Grayson has reached a
conclusion that no one is more deserving than another and that everyone must be
treated equally. (Grayson 595)
The writer’s justification and reasoning was deductive because it was based on
her opinion and beliefs, she doesn’t believe that Malala deserves all the
attention given by Britain and its media, meanwhile others will think
otherwise.
As a
text, “Brand Malala” holds many contents, starting from Malala’s situation and
ending with the writer’s own opinion regarding the whole case. Grayson’s
outlook might have a sensitive effect on those who will read and disagree with
it; since she argues against what has been done, but justifies her point of
view in fair and mannerly way, no insults and no disregard. The writer’s
purpose is basically to strive for a better society to fulfill a reasonable and
just community.
Works Cited:
Grayson, Carol
Anne. ""Brand Malala": Western Expoitation of a Schoolgirl
." Beirut, American Univeristy of. Shifting Narrative. 2013. 593.
more intext citation needed
ReplyDeletework cited: add editors. add title of book in italics. fix publication info after title. medium print at end.
social: there are grammar mistakes that make this section weak
emotional: good but you are talking about tone
rhetorical: its argumentative
logical: what are her conclusions
ethical: