“Brand Malala”: Western
Exploitation of a School Girl
Social perspective:
With reference to society, Grayson’s overall
claim about Malala attempts to raise awareness on gender justice by critiquing
how the West, UK in particular, exploited her to become a “marketable western
commodity” (Grayson 593). We were so fooled by the social media, we failed to
realize that there were two other woman in the shooting with Malala who did not
receive the care and support they deserved to get. The media, with its biased
deeds, focused on the publicity of only Malala’s incident in order to serve
western interests. The author refers to the double standards present in our
modern day society and how, in our case, Malala was given the finest treatment
that others deserved to have. She reveals a concernment of how the exploitation
of women is so deep-rooted in our society that it is “highlighting divisions in
many ways” (Grayson 595) and that this unfair treatment is major problem in
today’s modern world. The text focuses on delivering a message on the injustice
and wrongdoings the government is liable for.
Logical perspective:
Grayson takes a moral standpoint
throughout the text. She tells that the West took advantage of Malala’s
shooting and used her as a Western commodity, not as a means to offer help
towards the women of the east. She provides evidence to her standpoint by
asking us “I wonder, how many people can name the other girls injured when
Malala was shot?” (Grayson 596). This portraits the unfair treatment executed
by the media. Malala was surrounded by attention and “immense media coverage”
(Grayson 597) while the others are being suppressed. This is convincing because
the “two tier system” Grayson mentions in her text depicts the unjust treatment
present in our society. The author clearly states that it’s not Malala she has
a problem with but with the “extent she is being exploited by her new mentors
in the UK” (Grayson 593). She holds a clear viewpoint that she is against the
Western approaches on media publication.
Rhetorical perspective:
At some point throughout the text,
Grayson used a sense of mad sarcasm when she referred to the “mentors in the
UK” (Grayson 593). She tries to express the degree of irritation she has
towards the actions of the West. She takes somewhat an argumentative position
throughout the text demonstrating the rejection the thousand other victims were
exposed to when only Malala’s story was publicized. On the other hand, she
appears to be explanatory when she gives examples to the statements she speaks.
For instance, she gives examples of how Rigoberta Menchu “was thrust into the
limelight” like Malala to further express her outlooks on such manners. Furthermore,
she includes a lot of rhetorical questions in her text like “what quality of
care and support did they receive?” and “Can we assume she will not be targeted
in UK?” to evoke a broader sense of understanding of what she is trying to
express and to just leave us with few questions in mind that would help us
comprehend the main issue. The author uses words like bright, caring and
committed to show her unbiased opinion on Malala and that it’s the government
she has a problem with, not Malala as a person. She does not display any sort
of ambiguity in her attitude and voices a clear view on the topic.
Emotional perspective:
In the emotional perspective a variety
of tones can be concluded from the text. First of all, it’s obvious she has an
angry tint when she says “This does not help the cause of any woman while one
is exploited and others are being suppressed!” (Grayson 598). The tone is
clearly emphasized when she includes an exclamation at the end of the sentence
and it demonstrates her anger towards the exploitation of Malala. At the same
time, a sense of sympathy and consideration toward the oppressed can be grasped
throughout the text as she mentions the opportunities and rights denied from
the people. Ironically, she not only shows sympathy towards the oppressed but
also for Malala. The phrase “As an intelligent young role model, I don’t imagine
Malala would want this” (Grayson 598) demonstrates a notion of compassion
towards Malala despite her exploitation by the West. She seems to understand
that it’s not her fault of what happened and believe she deserves the peace she
was not given.
Ethical perspective:
The text carries a strong moral
message that everyone deserves equal rights. It strives to achieve social
justice and it does so by encouraging “greater equality” (Grayson 594) not only
to the oppressed woman but for everyone who experienced similar sufferings as
Malala. Jonathon Rao admitted his concerns to the newspaper and stated “I guess
I was worried that she was probably a pawn in a bigger game” which highlights the
unjust ethical approach that the West targeted Malala’s incident. She indirectly
claims they were using her to satisfy their interests. The text calls for the
responsibilities of human rights that the government failed to give to the people
and that social justice should be restored.
Work cited:
Grayson, Carol Anne.
“”Brand Malala”: Western Exploitation of a Schoolgirl”. Shifting
narratives. Zane S. Sinno, Lina Bioghlu-Karkanawi, Dorota Fleszar, Najla
Jarkas, Emma Moughabghab, Jennifer M. Nish, Rima Rantisi, and Abir Ward.
Mazraa, Beirut: Center for educational consultation and Research,
Educart, 2015. Print.
work cited: Italics Shifting Narratives, Ed. Before editors names, Not Mazraa but Beirut; Educart (middle east), 2015. pages. Print (NOT BAD)
ReplyDeleteintext citation: if you use her name in the sentence drop her name from the citation. (595).
social: the last line is great
emotional: good but you can go further, great justification with the sympathy and malala bit
rhetorical: good justify
logical: your missing the perspective of the people living in the UK and the women's rights of these citizens.
ethical: good