Abla 1
Salameh Abla
Prof. Dania Adra
English 203
26 September 2015
Social perspective
Greyson is trying to explain that the media is
using Malala as a way to try and cover up all the other young people in Pakistan,
which have been harmed, but have not gotten the same care that Malala got. Like
Malala’s friends who have been left to live in fear and all the other people
who were harmed and weren’t shipped off to get first class treatment.
Emotional perspective
The author seems to be going through different
feelings at different parts of the text. The main emotion coral seems to be
harbouring is anger. Anger towards companies that view a terrifying situation
and twist it in order to make a profit out of it. Another emotion that was
visible was pride. The author spoke highly of Malala whenever she mentioned her
and put all the blame on the people abusing her
Logical Perspective
The author is trying to exhume
the dark side of the media. Showing us that it’s not all rainbows and puppies,
and not everything you see on television is done with the best of intensions.
Money is what feeds the beast and people will go to an extent to get it. An
example the author gives us would be Rigoberta Menchu who “is alleged to have
altered facts to project her cause” (Grayson 597).
Rhetorical Perspective
The text as a whole
seems to be a non-fictional argumentative essay, comparing and contrasting the different
outcomes that certain people have gone through. She uses quite a bit of
rhetorical questions throughout the essay to help the readers think about the
whole problem a little bit more in depth like “I wonder, how many people can
name the other girls injured when Malala was shot? What quality of care and
support did they receive? Are they represented by PR companies?” Greyson’s
essay is made up of mostly long sentences with some, but very little repetition.
Ethical Perspective
By the end of the
blog, Greyson says:
Malala should not be used as a diversion to distract away from other
women that have been fighting in British courts for years to highlight
injustice and the wrongdoing of government. This does not help the cause
of any woman while one is exploited and others are being suppressed!
She is emphasizing how it is
our duty to make sure everyone gets the treatment they deserve and not only a
select few. She also speaks about how strong, good role models like Malala (who
like Greyson, wants the best for others) are seen as weak by the media and
taken advantage of, and how that should be brought to an end, while also
ensuring that their, and all the other voices that have not been heard, be
heard
Work Cited
Grayson,
Carol Anne. “’Brand Malala’: Western Exploitation of a School Girl”. Shifting Narratives: A Reader for Academic
Writing. Educart (Middle East) Publishing: Beirut, 2015.
Work Cited: Great, add pages before print, and add Ed. Editors after Shifting Narratives. ITALICS shifting Narratives. Publishing all wrong
ReplyDeleteIntext citation: NONE
social: fragments and weak grammar, elaborate more
ReplyDeleteemotional: great, Justify
rhetorical: OK, Justify
logical: OK, but talk about women's rights in the UK
ethical: good